Monday, September 15, 2008

Fire on the Mountain (ralph)

Today after discoverying the island that we are stuck on. Since I was the leader of this group I had to make sure everyone in their place and make sure no one get lost. I told everyone to relax at the place we are staying at since it was night. Jack was kind of mad at me because he really wanted to be leader but the little kids was scared of him because he was always be mean to them and boss them around. I could tell the martyred of the little boys faces and can almost tell what they be feeling. When it was the middle of the night all the boys sat down on little rocks and telling the adventures that we saw. This younger little boy screamed "beastie" all the boys didn't believe there was a beastie people that he was lying. He was just officous so people can really beleive him but no one did. I said to the boys that we going to have to hike this mountain so someone can see us to be rescured. After that night it was the afternoon and Ralph and the other boys wanted to be rescued from that island.

So Ralph and the others boys hiked up that mountain, when we reached the mountain where had a role to do. I told the twins sam and eric to go brang arms of dried wood for the fire so someone can find us. I had made a fire so someone can recognize I told everyone to go get things so this fire can work. I grabbed the conch because I believe that we can be rescued, I don't know if it's gonna take all day or even a whole day or night. When everyone got all the supplies that I told everyone to get the fire was hardly coming up. Piggy thinks this whole plan is not going to work but he isn't sure how to stop this this plan from happening. The little kids didn't know if it would happen or not all they care was leaving this place. Piggy wanted to speak but everyone was talking at once and peoples was interrupting, he was really mad he was recrimination and his voice was virtuous. He told everyone that we have to build a shelter by the beach and the little kids was screaming and Piggy was mad about this whole plan.

Ralph tooked the conch away from Piggy and he tryed to leave smoke so people could save them from the island. Piggy tooked back the conch because he thinks we aren't never going to be rescued from this island I told Piggy to "shut up" because I know we are going to be saved if we put are all, and if everyone is helping us improve. Piggy was mad because I told him to shut up and he didn't even talk to me after that. After a good while I had the conch and I put it down to look at the other people and see how the are doing. When I looked back the conch shell had broken into fragments. I didn't even know what I did but it had broken some how. I was kind of upset for what I did but I don't know.

1 comment:

Ms Collene said...

Looking awesome Raziya, keep up the good work!